First Dance
Series: Sailor Moon
Sex factor: fairly high
Kink factor: none
Yes, another Usagi/Mamoru first time. For some indefinable
reason, though, I find myself disliking this one. Perhaps it's the shot
the author takes regarding Rei in the next-to-last paragraph - it was entirely
unecessary and irrelevant. If you want to settle the score regarding Rei
and Mamoru's relationship as you see it, then fine, work it into the
story somehow, make it important enough to mention. As a throwaway
comment so near the end it comes across as nothing but a veiled attack on
other peoples' perceptions.