(link currently missing) Track Day
Series: Sailor Moon
Sex factor: fairly high
Kink factor: none
I think I'm becoming unfairly biased against this author from the
long run of stories. I really do. Because my first reaction is to whine
about having Serena beating Alex in a race. Which is a completely silly
thing to whine about. (But if you're going to tread on someone's
specialty, build up to it more! It's forgivable because it *did* at least
make some noise about Serena having worked hard for this and wanting to
win... but unless I missed it I don't really know why she cared. Give me
a reason to root for her and I'd be more willing to let her leave Alex in
the dust.) Oh yeah, and then Serena and Darien go have sex, and the
author scolds people again.